"This was the first time it happened, but after a while it got so common she ceased to be suprised. It was like a drug. In a way it was good because it reconciled her to things. She got so she recieved all things with the stolidness of the earth which soaks up urine and perfume with the same indifference."
Syntax: short and long sentences
Word Choice: short and simple words mixed with long and elegant words
Sound Devices: recurring rec sound
All of this creates a TONE: of strength and half-heartedness, a daze, almost as if she is in a dream
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